Give them everything, give them light and dark2

Thank you very much for the in depth comment, Danie, I really appreciate it, here is my revised version, hope it is better?

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Comment by Danie Bester on April 25, 2017 at 11:24

Without the distraction of those two diagonal lines you had in previously, I would have kept that background a bit darker though, because following the principles of Visual Weight, my eye is still drawn into the bright area in the background. Feature still! 

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